A new poem what do you think? ( just a bit of whimsy)?

Question:The Bouncy Dog
By Philip Franklin

She was a bouncy dog, a boxer
Mad as a hatter loony as a spoon
But she came with an owner
She lifted the gloom

She was neat and petite
Looked like Doris Day
She said, ‘ Oh! I’m sorry’
When her dog got in my way

I said, ‘it is no matter’
As l gazed into her eyes
Then something odd happened
A word to the wise

She is still a bouncy dog
As mad as a hatter
I married the owner
That’s the end of the matter

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The Bouncy Dog
By Philip Franklin

She was a bouncy dog, a boxer
Mad as a hatter loony as a spoon
But she came with an owner
She lifted the gloom

She was neat and petite
Looked like Doris Day
She said, ‘ Oh! I’m sorry’
When her dog got in my way

I said, ‘it is no matter’
As l gazed into her eyes
Then something odd happened
A word to the wise

She is still a bouncy dog
As mad as a hatter
I married the owner
That’s the end of the matter

Hi Grumpy old man, Now that was funny, reminds me of my dog, but I never got to marry Doris Day (not old enough). Its nice to see a dog bouncing and having fun, well done my old friend. Peter

well... just so so

aw!!! i like it! i think its sweet!!!

CUTE....

Lol
Thats Really Good

That's sweet. Is it true?

very nice :)

thats good actually