What do you think about this poem about a girls father?

Question:She came home from school, A smile on her face.
So happy that she was a part of this place.

A bright cheerful day, sunny sky with no clouds.
She entered her house, and heard her mother crying aloud.
She walked into the living room, to the mother and her friend.
The looks on their faces, made her great day come to an end.

Now baby don't cry but its hard to say,
That daddy died in a car crash earlier today.
She didn't understand, for she was only 5 years old.
She didn't seem upset at all, that made her mothers blood run cold.

All the girl said was this: 'So I wont see Daddy anymore?
Okay, can I go to Heather's at six?' She said nothing more.
The years passed and then she realized,
That she would never be able to look her daddy in his eyes.

She would go to bed crying, every single night.
She was daddy's little girl, this just can't be right.
Then she started to lose it, fighting with her family everyday.
She became a different person, she never acted this way.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: She came home from school, A smile on her face.
So happy that she was a part of this place.

A bright cheerful day, sunny sky with no clouds.
She entered her house, and heard her mother crying aloud.
She walked into the living room, to the mother and her friend.
The looks on their faces, made her great day come to an end.

Now baby don't cry but its hard to say,
That daddy died in a car crash earlier today.
She didn't understand, for she was only 5 years old.
She didn't seem upset at all, that made her mothers blood run cold.

All the girl said was this: 'So I wont see Daddy anymore?
Okay, can I go to Heather's at six?' She said nothing more.
The years passed and then she realized,
That she would never be able to look her daddy in his eyes.

She would go to bed crying, every single night.
She was daddy's little girl, this just can't be right.
Then she started to lose it, fighting with her family everyday.
She became a different person, she never acted this way.

O My Gosh that was Beautiful did u make that upo urself WOW!

This sounds more like a short story to me.
Nice:)