Poems , opinions ?

Question:You can’t hold back love
Like you can’t hold back spring
Birds are chirping
Trumpets are playing
Dogs are barking
Racoons are in my park
With the fire works
And the leaves
Skylarking
Right now she’s tapping on someone door
Our world keeps dreaming of another spring
Close your eyes
& open your heart
Go and watch the tide roll in

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You can’t hold back love
Like you can’t hold back spring
Birds are chirping
Trumpets are playing
Dogs are barking
Racoons are in my park
With the fire works
And the leaves
Skylarking
Right now she’s tapping on someone door
Our world keeps dreaming of another spring
Close your eyes
& open your heart
Go and watch the tide roll in

It's very visual and alive ... I do like like it ... I can almost feel a gentle breeze flowing through my hair... and I could swear that the dogs barking are my two little "girls" !!

good one

it lacked that "umph"

excellent very nice keep it up. very good .