New poem, please comment?

Question:a late apology

i wouldn't have done it
if you had treated me right
it was like i wasn't there
i'm sure you understand

because you broke my heart
and i couldn't heal
i had to take drastic measures
and end a life here

as the blood dripped down my wrists
was it a mistake
a regret?
i could barely breath

so i apologize
because it's your life i end
the knife in your heart
your blood on my hands

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: a late apology

i wouldn't have done it
if you had treated me right
it was like i wasn't there
i'm sure you understand

because you broke my heart
and i couldn't heal
i had to take drastic measures
and end a life here

as the blood dripped down my wrists
was it a mistake
a regret?
i could barely breath

so i apologize
because it's your life i end
the knife in your heart
your blood on my hands

Wow your poems are so great and off the hook.I am new to the poetry writing and i hope mine ges half as good as yours..keep writing as your great.

there are no rhymes.
it doesn't flow well(because of rhyme defecientcy&wording sometimes)

VERY DEEP!

rhyming will get u more points!

Very graphic, poignant and true. Did you just write this? Did this really happen, in the past? Anyhow I loved it, but it was painful.

I like it it was very good very detailed and you can fell the emotion through the words.

Tour de force. I like how the brisk sprint fluently surged to the sure finish.