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Question:while you are critiquing please remember that i am only 14, so dont expect a masterpiece

thanks so much;

http://selene-brambl.deviantart.com/

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: while you are critiquing please remember that i am only 14, so dont expect a masterpiece

thanks so much;

http://selene-brambl.deviantart.com/

In my soft voice I uttered a softly, "Damn!"

That's a good response, if you must know. I haven't said that in a long time. I'm just so amazed by your talent.

You're beyond talented. There are a lot college art majors that are not half as talented as you are. Forgive, me I'm just overwhelmed by what I've seen in your site.

First of all. Your photographs are great! You have a great sense of composition. You are already there with that. The way you see things, are so... I can't even find a word for it. I saw your Turn Ahead and I like it, but I was wondering why I like it. I also like Path, and wonder the same thing, too. I got to thinking, maybe it's how it's arrange, the juxpositioning of it really bring out the life of those photos. It's like that phrase vintage meets modern (although the Vintage meets modern and But only me were the only photos that didn't do anything for me.). You know how hard it is to make something like a street interesting. You did it. 9 of your photos tell stories, like it should. Sunshine would have been perfect but it was a bit out of focus. Have it been in focus, it would be something people would buy. Iris, you did something only few have ever done. Mirror reflection symbolized the other personality of a person in it, most of the time it is inferred. With your photo it's like I could see the different personality of each of the image. I could go on.
You have natural talent showing already. Work on your technical aspect of photography, and keep on doing what you are doing and as you get better, I would bet that you be among the elite artist.
Secondly, your writing. Damn!

You have this talent to transport others through your words. They are so vivid. I haven't read it all but what I read so far I like (I love, actually). I like Awake, and like the street photo you put so much life in it.

Keep on doing what you are doing. Take a photography class and learn about shutter speeds, lens openning, and lights... and anything you can learn technically.

Softly I say, "Damn! You're good."

its great..