Lonely in paradise?

Question:fragrant wild flower scent
mingles with the breeze
the joyful song of singing birds
rings out among the trees

Sunlight's dancing on the water
sprinking it with gleam
adding to the beauty
of the softy foaming stream

I gaze upon the heavens
watch two clouds as they ride by
they look like giant horses
white stallions in the sky

I'm standing in the chruch yard
where as a child I was blessed
I've come to see my mother
for it's where she's laid to rest

I'm writing this for you my love
my darling wife and friend
I know now if your reading this
my days are at an end

I wish that i could break my vowel
till death do us two part
it pains me dear to think of you
alone with broken heart

It's only thoughts of you my love
that make me sad that I have died
for I am here in paradise
with mother by my side.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: fragrant wild flower scent
mingles with the breeze
the joyful song of singing birds
rings out among the trees

Sunlight's dancing on the water
sprinking it with gleam
adding to the beauty
of the softy foaming stream

I gaze upon the heavens
watch two clouds as they ride by
they look like giant horses
white stallions in the sky

I'm standing in the chruch yard
where as a child I was blessed
I've come to see my mother
for it's where she's laid to rest

I'm writing this for you my love
my darling wife and friend
I know now if your reading this
my days are at an end

I wish that i could break my vowel
till death do us two part
it pains me dear to think of you
alone with broken heart

It's only thoughts of you my love
that make me sad that I have died
for I am here in paradise
with mother by my side.

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Wow, it is good.
I like it. didn't you mean vow, not vowel?
Very nice work:)

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