A good-night poem ?

Question:within darkness
the mind
can not see,
only of wishes
of hopes to be

we search
as we seek
our thoughts
to conform

upon this night
we sleep
to wish no more.

good night,,,,,

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: within darkness
the mind
can not see,
only of wishes
of hopes to be

we search
as we seek
our thoughts
to conform

upon this night
we sleep
to wish no more.

good night,,,,,

nice

I tried to read it but I fell asleep

A good poem to describe your dreams

I like it, very good. But you know it doesn't have to be a goodnight poem. When I read stuff about night I remember some of the stuff Walt W. And Alfred T. used using night to discribe stuff.

Using it, saying, the world is falling asleep. Their dreams fell asleep. Stuff like that. Very solomn, not a crap load of puctuation, makes it just roll off the tounge.

not bad

That is a beautiful poem. It reminds me of the night sky when it's clear and cold and every single star shines.

Thank you but I'm up early in the morning reading it. I think it's good though.