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Question:Let our minds move
All on one accord
I want a melody thoughts
To be one on the dance floor

Will you mentally dance with me?

Let our hearts glide
To the rythm of the same drum
As the two that start the tango
Dance their way into one

Will you emotionally dance with me?

As our bodies come together
Chest to chest and cheek to cheek
As the music fills the air
I slowly move to your heartbeat

Will you physically dance with me?

Melodies
Rythms
Beats

Minds
Hearts
Bodies

Dance with Me


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Let our minds move
All on one accord
I want a melody thoughts
To be one on the dance floor

Will you mentally dance with me?

Let our hearts glide
To the rythm of the same drum
As the two that start the tango
Dance their way into one

Will you emotionally dance with me?

As our bodies come together
Chest to chest and cheek to cheek
As the music fills the air
I slowly move to your heartbeat

Will you physically dance with me?

Melodies
Rythms
Beats

Minds
Hearts
Bodies

Dance with Me

Our bodies like thoughts
Move rhythmically in a single embrace
Lucid like fluid we flow
Across the dance floor

Mentally we are one.

The mind pulsates
And we are aroused, as passion is released
Excitement fills every movement
Hypnotizing.

Emotionally we are one.

Sensations extend
Beyond our fingertips
As our eyes reflect words unspoken
Our hearts beat a single pulse.

Physically we are one.

Embrace
Passion
Sensation

Bodies
Minds
Hearts

Yes.. I'll dance with you.


Temari

Thanks for the dance... and get it straight... you inspired me Report It


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  • awwwww....really cute

    yes.. lets dance.

    Thats a weird question.

    I will
    offer you my hand,
    and listen
    to the music.

    I will sing
    a million rhapsodies,
    from universe
    unknown.

    In all three ways
    shall we dance,
    becoming one until,
    no longer do we move
    to the beat of
    the music.

    YOU NEED TO WORK ON THAT ALLOTTT

    omg yes i will dance with you

    Interesting. I have two left feet lol! But I would try!

    i enjoyed this poem very much. i love to dance and to see dance written is a double treat.

    I'll dance with you; just name the time and the place!

    I like this poem.

    Yes friend, I will dance with you. I love the subtle, slow beat of seduction, coming to it's close yet opening in the lines "melodies, rhythms, beats/minds, hearts, bodies." To me it shows the way a true love should grow. I long to lose myself in this dance and find one who will mentally, emotionally, and physically take me to the floor.

    After reading your request, It eases my mind to remember that it takes two to tango. Now if Temari had written it....

    Ok, I will pay for the motel room for you and Temari. Such passion, such flow, such zest, for a moment I thought I was watching Dancing with the Stars!

    From far away
    In my mind I can see
    You in my heart
    Dancing with me

    Spiritually I will dance with thee

    Pretend we are gliding
    Sliding the floor
    Gracefully

    In word and intention I will dance with thee

    Sensations of feelings
    Reeling and turning
    Silently

    Evermore in my heart I will dance with thee

    Steps
    Slides
    Touches

    Feels
    Imagines
    Senses

    Yes I will dance with thee