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Question:Please hold my hand and tell me that I'm the only one
This time say it like you mean it, if I'm not don't bite your tongue
Of course the truth hurts, but the lies hurt even more
So I'll accept the truth if that means I'll go out the door
In the end we will be better, with no more pain to bear
And if we remain together, we can only grow from there
I stand in need of truth, be it good or be it bad
If we don't have truth then tell me, what do we really have


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Please hold my hand and tell me that I'm the only one
This time say it like you mean it, if I'm not don't bite your tongue
Of course the truth hurts, but the lies hurt even more
So I'll accept the truth if that means I'll go out the door
In the end we will be better, with no more pain to bear
And if we remain together, we can only grow from there
I stand in need of truth, be it good or be it bad
If we don't have truth then tell me, what do we really have

*she smiles*

Knowing that most of our conversations start with the word "truth"
Nicely done Trucker Man. Like I said earlier ... I've seen you're best work this week.



Temari

You honesty wrote your best stuff this week. I don't know where it's coming from, nor do I care. To be inspired is inspiring in itself... Much love always. Report It


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  • Awww, this was really good.

    truth you say?

    I LOVE THIS ONE! It's true; without truth in a relationship, what do we really have?

    The truth is "so the truth hurts" is a cliche which took away from a very nice piece. Yeah, yeah, so I am being picky, I'm just trolling for some trolls.