My Friend... A good poem?

Question:My Friend

Every time you smile
I feel like the sun has come up
And the day has started again

For in My life
Your smile means
Happiness is not far away

Every time you laugh
I hear the Band playing
And want to join you.

I love the way your sax sounds
Even though I swore
Never to love a sax player

Every time you come my way
I try to hide the feelings
I have for you

I want to stay friends
Yet, my feelings
Could make things uncomfortable

HELP ME!! I need to make more sense with this. I know how I feel, but I can't get it into words wich is frustrating if you knew me! If you have a better Idea, e-mail me

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: My Friend

Every time you smile
I feel like the sun has come up
And the day has started again

For in My life
Your smile means
Happiness is not far away

Every time you laugh
I hear the Band playing
And want to join you.

I love the way your sax sounds
Even though I swore
Never to love a sax player

Every time you come my way
I try to hide the feelings
I have for you

I want to stay friends
Yet, my feelings
Could make things uncomfortable

HELP ME!! I need to make more sense with this. I know how I feel, but I can't get it into words wich is frustrating if you knew me! If you have a better Idea, e-mail me

This is just a suggestion.
I left most of it the same so it would still be yours.
Good luck:)

Every time you smile...
I feel like the sun has come up,
And the day has started anew.

With you in my life...
Your smile means,
Happiness is not far away.

Every time you laugh...
I hear the Band playing.
And want to join you.

I love the way your sax sounds,
Even though I was never,
To love a sax player.

Every time you come my way...
I try to hide my feelings,
That I've developed for you.

I want to stay friends..
Yet, with my feelings now,
Could change the way we are.

This is a nice poem of friends
and its positive because it talks about
the smile and about the sun.
I would say a new day has started.
The next paragraph is
the smile
that is a brighten up
Hearing someone laugh
describes a band
this means you want to be with your friend
even more.

the gentlest smile
the most angelic laugh
enchanting music fills me ears and speaks to my soul reaching in a steeling every inch of sadness
if i could tell him how i feel i would have a whole new world
knowing how we feel about each other could never break our friendship