Please critique my poems (link inside)?

Question:avivah.deviantart.com

thank you so much.
pick any you' d like, my more recent ones are better.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: avivah.deviantart.com

thank you so much.
pick any you' d like, my more recent ones are better.

they are great
love the MCAS one...and its true

its ok