My last poem for the night?

Question:if the outside is seen,
the reflection is saw
if the inside is seen,
the reflection is more

and

Take what you hear,
and get a good view
take what you find
and your friendship will be true

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: if the outside is seen,
the reflection is saw
if the inside is seen,
the reflection is more

and

Take what you hear,
and get a good view
take what you find
and your friendship will be true

I agree with Demon Girl, it does have a good ring to them.
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Keep it up.
You gotzz skilzzz
lol.
I'm jk I dont talk like that!
You have great skills.
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nice. has a good ring to it.

Wow i love your poem. It was quite beuautiful ^_^ I do some poetry of my own as well. I actually got this poem and it's very true. Thankyou for sharing it.

-Georgina Janette

I like them both... especially the first one. That's really nice. With such a deep meaning...

You are on a roll today, anyway both of them are awesome but I like the second one more. And yes, both have good rhyme to it, but in the first one the only thing that would bring its over all effect down in the second line, the last word saw, does not fit in.

i love em both
you've got nuff talent, the way u make ur words flow

i like it a lot it flows nicely!
sounds almost like a lullaby!

perfect. im really feeling it from this poem. the connection, the truth of it. yeah. this is a good poem. nice.

When an attempt at poetry is so outstandingly hopeless that even an extremely unintelligent individual such as myself can recognize its pitiable state, there can be no doubt that the author should, in great haste and without distraction, rush to the nearest precipice and hurl himself far into the night.
As to the praise you have received, I being stupid am unable to create a derogatory run on sentence worthy of explaining the great shallowness and stupidity of those who so generously poured it out.