Do you like this poem I made about america?

Question:Honest opinions....is it any good? I made it in 5 minutes lol

lol i made this in 5 minutes.....is it any good?

America! America!
You're the land that I love,
for your equality and justice,
and peace like a dove.

I love this land
from the bottom of my heart,
a land so sweet
neverless tart

Freedom and Liberty
Justice for all!
America! America!
The best land of them all!

From New York to L.A.
Sea to shining sea
America! America!
Your the place i love to be!

Those red and white stripes,
those white stars with blue
America! America!
My love for you is true!!!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Honest opinions....is it any good? I made it in 5 minutes lol

lol i made this in 5 minutes.....is it any good?

America! America!
You're the land that I love,
for your equality and justice,
and peace like a dove.

I love this land
from the bottom of my heart,
a land so sweet
neverless tart

Freedom and Liberty
Justice for all!
America! America!
The best land of them all!

From New York to L.A.
Sea to shining sea
America! America!
Your the place i love to be!

Those red and white stripes,
those white stars with blue
America! America!
My love for you is true!!!

Hey its not bad, I like it... Could be a song, maybe get some one to write music to this and send it to the White House to be played on the 4th of July...
Its an idea...

It is fun and catchy, a little too pollyanna though. Good kids poem.

i don't like america.
try Canada

equality?

Justice for all??

Peace like a dove???

Sure your taking about America?

It is nice, but seems like some part of it is not too original. I don't really think the last eight lines are that great compared to the rest. I mean the ending is weaker than the beginning.