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Question:your shoes your ugly shoes made me lose the race
with empy thoughts i stare into a sea of chalk
its four o' clock oh four o clock
and im fighting wiht whats on my plate in this plate
patti smith in my ears thin faces on the screen in the screen
im falling in the ground and out this scribbly sky
purple pencils, unused stencils on the floor in the floor
destored image in the mirror
i find myself on the floor on the floor
i cant take this any more
my bones are just so sore


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: your shoes your ugly shoes made me lose the race
with empy thoughts i stare into a sea of chalk
its four o' clock oh four o clock
and im fighting wiht whats on my plate in this plate
patti smith in my ears thin faces on the screen in the screen
im falling in the ground and out this scribbly sky
purple pencils, unused stencils on the floor in the floor
destored image in the mirror
i find myself on the floor on the floor
i cant take this any more
my bones are just so sore

wow i really like that
love the format
good job