A poem that is close to me... Will you dare to read?

Question:SeaDress

The moving glass
Of Seas’ sharp gown
A fine, new dress
She twirls around
The white and gray
Blue and green
All colors held
In her great dream
Never still
She dances round
Her foot and heel
Make peaceful sound
Now up and down
Her clumsy fall
Under her shoe
The greatest fall

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: SeaDress

The moving glass
Of Seas’ sharp gown
A fine, new dress
She twirls around
The white and gray
Blue and green
All colors held
In her great dream
Never still
She dances round
Her foot and heel
Make peaceful sound
Now up and down
Her clumsy fall
Under her shoe
The greatest fall

I love the energy and feeling I get from this. It makes me feel close to the way this warmer weather has been making me feel. Good job!

Sounds very nice.

I like it.

sounds pretty good.

I liked it a lot as i love all your poetry.You are so talented and enjoy always reading your work....

I loved the description of the gown the sea wears... How she is clumsy yet graceful... this is a beauty beyond words yet you have written them... good job baby.

Why is this one close to you hun? I know you can do better. Not to say that this isn't good! It is wonderful. I think you should push on and write more... this sounds familiar to me.

Love ya babe!

I feel the ocean in this one. In my opinion you are describing your love for the water. I could be wrong (I have been a few times......today). I did liketh it.

It seems very much about the falling of the Earth, the way our erratic movements cloud her dance. This is beautiful and thought provoking and I'd say more but Albright is shining her light...AHHHH!!!

This is beautiful, and I think sort of anti-climactic in the end. I don't understand the last stanza, where both words are fall. It confuses me.