Do you find my poem Titanic?

Question:The Northern Princess

Before the first seal the ice became
Plateau before above the Artic Sea floor
“Winter now,” whisper the wind
In the enclave of each icy wave

The disaster was swift, these men
Were made Titanic promises
And will their joy to ego all the more
And enjoyments whose shine would come from those depths

To remove them and feast closer upon their shine
Plateau before
Above the sea floor, the sun began to shine

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The Northern Princess

Before the first seal the ice became
Plateau before above the Artic Sea floor
“Winter now,” whisper the wind
In the enclave of each icy wave

The disaster was swift, these men
Were made Titanic promises
And will their joy to ego all the more
And enjoyments whose shine would come from those depths

To remove them and feast closer upon their shine
Plateau before
Above the sea floor, the sun began to shine

i absolutely love it.
I can actually see an image and imagine i am there.

One thing, very small, is the last "and" in the 2nd stanza, it should be removed. sounds better. well to me at least. =)