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Position:Home>Poetry> My Appology to the World (please comment)?Question:For all of the rights I know I have wronged And all of the wrongs I can't right For all of the pain I know I have caused And all of the hell I cant fight For all of the tears I know I have cried And all of the hate that I've spit For all of the love I know I've deprived And all of the flaws I cant quit For all of the lies I know I have spoke And all of the truth I can't see For all of the bad I know I provoke And all of the good I can't be For all of the angels I've shot from the sky And all of the demons I've raised For all of the righteous I've chose to deny And all of the evil I've praised For all of the wishes that never came true And all of the warnings that did For all of the lessons I shouldn't have learned And all of the shame that I hid I truly am sorry for all that I've done But this I have learned long at last You're life is a journey that carries you on No future in dwelling the past Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: For all of the rights I know I have wronged And all of the wrongs I can't right For all of the pain I know I have caused And all of the hell I cant fight For all of the tears I know I have cried And all of the hate that I've spit For all of the love I know I've deprived And all of the flaws I cant quit For all of the lies I know I have spoke And all of the truth I can't see For all of the bad I know I provoke And all of the good I can't be For all of the angels I've shot from the sky And all of the demons I've raised For all of the righteous I've chose to deny And all of the evil I've praised For all of the wishes that never came true And all of the warnings that did For all of the lessons I shouldn't have learned And all of the shame that I hid I truly am sorry for all that I've done But this I have learned long at last You're life is a journey that carries you on No future in dwelling the past Impressive, really, as I read this I'm blown away. Your use of Antithesis (balancing) is really effective, ( instead of just, I've been wrong, I've been right). You really make us understand your emotion and bring us to where you are but then you bring us right back out of the dark with that last stanza. The order of you stanzas is very effective in stating your point and then becoming more poetic and rich until the poem finally comes to a close. Good work, creative topic. Oh God I loved it and can relate I loved it . i too believe there is no need to dwell in the past. I love how you appologized for the the things you could controll and couldnt. allows the person who is seeking the apology to understand you are really sincere. thanks for sharing It's really sincere, and after I read it, I was speechless. If I were any of the people or things mentioned in this poem, I would say "Apology accepted!" this is a masterpiece all of the above and you should try and get it published in a book or something look in newspaper and on the Internet for poetry competitions |