Poem not very good?

Question:Why is life
So full of pain?
Why is life
So insane?
Why does life
Have so many twists and turns?
Why is life
So full of yearns?

like i said not very good.... bored though

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Why is life
So full of pain?
Why is life
So insane?
Why does life
Have so many twists and turns?
Why is life
So full of yearns?

like i said not very good.... bored though

you're right...it's not very good. Depressing too.

quite boring i feel

She walked down the street, alone. She tried to keep her feet from falling. She let the rain take her away, even if she had a hood on. She found her home, in a park no one knew of. She sat down next to a tree, on the wet grass. She looked back at the sun, & said; "Why do they love me?".

We're all lonely for something we don't know we're lonely for. How else to explain the curious feeling that goes around feeling like missing somebody we've never even met? "

There's a story in your eyes, I can see the hurt behind your smile, For every sign I recognize, Another one escapes me is Away .

I think it is ok

its OK

boring. do something with it go a little deeper.

i think it is good, kinda gloomy though

i like it

y does poetry ALWAYS have to b depressing jeez!!!!!!!! put sum happiness into it

Life is full of things
some of things it brings
so full of pain
this hurts again and again
and will continue to do so
as anyone would know
I think this is a great poem
and I have read many of them.
This is nothing wrong.

I love this poem!