A type of poem i don't usually write. I hope you all like it.?

Question:"spring blooms"

Winter's seemed to pass me by,
it's disappeared, I blinked my eye.
All the doom and all the gloom,
I'm glad it's over, none to soon.

Spring has sprung up all around,
birds and bees, a lovely sound.
My mood has changed, oh so bright,
all the colors, command my sight.

The chill of Old Man Winters gone,
he hung around me way too long.
I thought he'd got the best of me,
but I'm still standing, feeling free.

Spring it comes, just once a year,
but it's reason is quite clear.
Krokus, lilies, all sublime,
love's in the air, now is the time.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "spring blooms"

Winter's seemed to pass me by,
it's disappeared, I blinked my eye.
All the doom and all the gloom,
I'm glad it's over, none to soon.

Spring has sprung up all around,
birds and bees, a lovely sound.
My mood has changed, oh so bright,
all the colors, command my sight.

The chill of Old Man Winters gone,
he hung around me way too long.
I thought he'd got the best of me,
but I'm still standing, feeling free.

Spring it comes, just once a year,
but it's reason is quite clear.
Krokus, lilies, all sublime,
love's in the air, now is the time.

its perfect! and its pleasently cheery!

Its good. Better than anything i could write!!!!!!!

im not sure i really liked it but i know i liked the third ...i think the word is stanza

sweet!! love it!! it reminds me of young love in spring. =) so romantic yet still gentle and sort of outdoorsy. nice job! =)

this is very beautiful, and a refreshing change!!!!!! all of your work is wonderful, you are incredibly talented.

Wow,way to take a risk by writing a new style! It sure
payed of because i thought it was superb!
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feeling better?? This is pleasently cheery.. just like dragonflyy said. xoxo

I like the fact that you are branching out to try new ideas. This flows well, just needs better imagery. Watch the cliches also, they will detract from anybody's poem. Spelling check: crocus and lillies. Overall, not bad. Your timing is impeccable though, it is snowing here today!

it's REALLY nice..............must have taken you a long time to think it through........keep writing ....your VERY good ?

Well done, good rhythm and rhyme and subject matter. Light and pleasant. You should do more of this style, you are good at it.

Totally enlightening my friend, uplifting and quite the breath of fresh air<3

This is perfect, I'm so very excited I had the chance to read it *^_^*

You nailed this'n DP!

Very pleasant. You did a nice 180. I enjoyed it.

A light, refreshing poem. I hope this mood will continue for you.

That's a funny spelling of Crocus - seriously, is it the way American's spell it?

I'm afraid your poem was a little bit too neat and tidy, and dare I say bland? All the sentiments expressed have been recorded before, and there isn't much there to excite the senses.

The second verse reminds me of an old verse a work colleague always used to recite with the coming of Spring
no idea where it is from

Spring has sprung
The sap has ris
I wonder where the birdies is?

I enjoy the happy/lighter side of you.
It was great.

wow. this really is different! i hope this is how you really feel. it has a really nice message to it and it's a really beautiful thing to read.

I am glad Winter is over and done with. Good riddance. It is now time to acquiesce and let Spring enter.

freshening... keep it up...