This is a poem I wrote to a girl, do you like it?

Question:"I miss you"

I miss you when I wrote
This poem I never wrote
But when you left I had to write
My feelings on this note

I miss you when I sing
That thing I used to sing
I forgot it, but I miss you now
When I sing anything

I miss you when I believed
That time I had believed,
I didn’t care but now I miss,
You every time I breathe

I miss you when I say,
These words I want to say,
Near or far I miss you more,
Each and every day

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "I miss you"

I miss you when I wrote
This poem I never wrote
But when you left I had to write
My feelings on this note

I miss you when I sing
That thing I used to sing
I forgot it, but I miss you now
When I sing anything

I miss you when I believed
That time I had believed,
I didn’t care but now I miss,
You every time I breathe

I miss you when I say,
These words I want to say,
Near or far I miss you more,
Each and every day

I like it alot
your girl will like it
(if you havent given it 2 her already)
It is very sweet and shows a softer side
Girls love that
When guys are all macho all the time it isnt cool
There has to be a blend of macho and sweetness.
You got the sweetness down pact though.
Love the poem

wish i could get a guy that wouldnt treat me like crap
Maybe he would be this sweet 2 write me a poem =(
*Tear*Tear*

you should put that on poetry.com
you got talent.

I write poetry too and I love doing it.
It helps get your feelings out on paper
&& if they are bad feelings its a good
healthy way to relive them from your mind.
&& sometimes even a cute gift. =)

yh lol

aww it's really sweet :)

Stop! Just call her, my friend!

Well ya its lovely.

I think this is great!

this is really cute i hope she reads it.

Very nice. Keep up the good work!

yeah.......it shows the true and faithful meaning of love....................................... know i would like it.......

I love it and that is so sweet to write that to a girl! Good Luck!!

Good stuff.
If she doesn't like that, she's not worthy of you, my friend.

It is different and unique..I like it..(the opening two lines just need adjusting..I miss you when I write, this poem, I never spoke)........Hope you dont mind me saying this...overall tho, I love it and have read it over many times.....could also make good song...just needs chorus between 1st two verses and repeated at the end..........keep up the writing..........
Had to come back and say..poetry.com, by all means but put your name on it first with small .. c..in a circle...(copyright)....

Its quite a good poem. I hope the girl reads it.

very sweet, i wish my hubby would write me something like this when he gets back from his business trips

Wow!!! That is really sweet. I think you should send that to her job with chocolates and tulips or lilies ( no roses... that says you know you messed up). That should help the situation.

Sure, It's a good poem.

I like it.....it flows nicely.