Graduation poem i wrote. tell me what u think!!!!?

Question:“Graduation Day”
Brittany Evanko

Everyone says they want to leave and never come back.
Some will have their lives planned out, having everything on track.
Others will not know where to go after this day is over.
Just wishing that everything will work out, like a four leaf clover
There will always be things that we will regret and wish to have changed. It is too late to fix our mistakes from the past, so we must accept that and rearrange.
As we look out over the gym, we think about all of the good times we've had. Realizing that our friends may not always be there suddenly makes everyone sad. The endless laughs we had at lunch, or the never ending sobbing of tears. We were always there for each other throughout all of the years.
Leaving High School will not be the end, but actually the beginning. Just another milestone that we have to overcome, simply another inning
New people to meet and places to go,
Learning new things, some of which we don't know.
Taking a breath of fresh air, we don't want to believe it is here
Not knowing what will come next, causes us nothing but fear.

Although we do not know what this road will hold
Our old friends will be by our side as it unfolds.

Knowing we don’t have much longer, we hug all that we know.
Wiping the tears of those who we know the best, the ones who watched us grow.
We all must remember, it is not time to say goodbye.
It is simply our time to spread our wings and fly.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: “Graduation Day”
Brittany Evanko

Everyone says they want to leave and never come back.
Some will have their lives planned out, having everything on track.
Others will not know where to go after this day is over.
Just wishing that everything will work out, like a four leaf clover
There will always be things that we will regret and wish to have changed. It is too late to fix our mistakes from the past, so we must accept that and rearrange.
As we look out over the gym, we think about all of the good times we've had. Realizing that our friends may not always be there suddenly makes everyone sad. The endless laughs we had at lunch, or the never ending sobbing of tears. We were always there for each other throughout all of the years.
Leaving High School will not be the end, but actually the beginning. Just another milestone that we have to overcome, simply another inning
New people to meet and places to go,
Learning new things, some of which we don't know.
Taking a breath of fresh air, we don't want to believe it is here
Not knowing what will come next, causes us nothing but fear.

Although we do not know what this road will hold
Our old friends will be by our side as it unfolds.

Knowing we don’t have much longer, we hug all that we know.
Wiping the tears of those who we know the best, the ones who watched us grow.
We all must remember, it is not time to say goodbye.
It is simply our time to spread our wings and fly.

i cried after reading this seriously this is fantastic hunny

Good job.