It's not finish sould i bother?

Question:Can you help me? what sould I do?
as any thing like this ever
happened to you?

I let a girl get under my skin
now she's attacking me from within.
She comes in my dreams and makes me weep
so now I'm to afraid to sleep
I don't know how i don't know why
she even made my minds eye cry

Can you help me? What should i do?
has any thing like this ever
happened to you

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Can you help me? what sould I do?
as any thing like this ever
happened to you?

I let a girl get under my skin
now she's attacking me from within.
She comes in my dreams and makes me weep
so now I'm to afraid to sleep
I don't know how i don't know why
she even made my minds eye cry

Can you help me? What should i do?
has any thing like this ever
happened to you

Yes, Andrew it has happened to me, only it was a boy not a girl! Suck it up, get over her, and get some sleep! LOL

Seriously, I think the poem is good, and you should finish it.

of course you should finish it! its very good so far!! put some more effort into it and you will get something that you really want!! if you say that you hate it,, then your not going to get anywhere! but just believe that you can finish it!! its very good so far,, so contunie with itt!