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Question:ah yes,

the face of midnight
a dwelling of un-sleep
the darkness is bright
written words to keep

fall into dormancy
if you may,
visions of comfort
or perhaps dismay

covered in satin
sheets of the night
darkness is comfort
for words to write..


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: ah yes,

the face of midnight
a dwelling of un-sleep
the darkness is bright
written words to keep

fall into dormancy
if you may,
visions of comfort
or perhaps dismay

covered in satin
sheets of the night
darkness is comfort
for words to write..

So your muse is satin or bright darkness? It is always interesting to see when the mind decides to shed thoughts that need words and words that need paper. Nicely said.

its beautiful....i loved it!!!

keep writing :)

pretty good

I just read it, and like it very much. Continue writing poem dear. Thank you for sharing!! Best wishes and Good night!!

very nice very peacful and effiecent, u only said what had to be

Very reflective and suggestive; however I failed to understand reason of using "darkness" in different might. What exactly do you mean to say "Darkness is bright" and later again your wish of experiencing that very darkness as "comfort"? Rather confused here.