Short Love Poem, Feedback?

Question:Trusfully open and caringly helpfull
amazingly generous and always undoubtful
sincere and strong, gawjusly cute
one bundle of love you'll never dilute
you give me ambition, you make me see
completing the warrior ive longed to be
day by day you make me smile, treating me like a king
warming my heart as your love starts to sing
In a kingdom of hearts id make you my queen
the beauty of our people at only fourteen
if i could do something to thank you please, just say
id be willing to do it just dont go away!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Trusfully open and caringly helpfull
amazingly generous and always undoubtful
sincere and strong, gawjusly cute
one bundle of love you'll never dilute
you give me ambition, you make me see
completing the warrior ive longed to be
day by day you make me smile, treating me like a king
warming my heart as your love starts to sing
In a kingdom of hearts id make you my queen
the beauty of our people at only fourteen
if i could do something to thank you please, just say
id be willing to do it just dont go away!

absolutely adorable if i guy gave me that id break down in tears. =]

I have read a ton of love poems and this one, besides some spelling errors, is just beautiful. I love the warrior aspect as well as the kingdom of hearts. Its short and I love it.