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I really like it.
Very nice work:)

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I really like the dark speech referring to something so intimate. It is taking a moder world and placing it in the eyes of fantasy!

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Something welled up inside me
and my heart sank at the thought
that all I ever wanted would fade
should I wake
from fantasies snare

Wonderful work. If another poet can inspire me, I find myself being blown away. I am not inspired easily.

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Well done. At least you did your own work! I can't get over the out right plagiarizing of a certain person here!

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A playful past-time
cloaked with fear,
upon a wall a princess
bites her nails.

It's not the ring
she fears,
but that liberating
kiss.

Thanks for the inspiration and the beautiful words. Have a beautiful day.

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It was GREAT!!! you will gain sucess doing this,my friend

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Perfectly put poetry.

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This is well written
it talks about the pain
of anticipation while waiting for
the performance to be done.

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Please play politely
Poets perplexed
Perhaps paranoid
Prying political pundits
Peer pressure
Protect private property...

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So, you watching March Madness or penning sonnets on Yahoo? Take care of the home front and Tivo the game. Even a poet needs some new muse. Well done.

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You do know how to put some of
the deepest thoughts together,
better then I do!
I myself used to write poetry, but
not as perfect as you and Temari.
Good Luck!

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