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Question:I am made from an evil seed
A dark thing really bad
A hateful horrible twisted seed
The devils favorite lad

When I was young my mother felt
The evil quicken in her womb
Some nasty putrid spirit
From a ancient tomb

When I was born there was a sense
That something was truely wrong
A sadness overhung me
Like a funeral song

As I grew up My parents wished
That I would just be gone
The other kids wouldn't play
My dark shadow was so long

I killed my cat and then my dog
But said they just up and died
I remember getting an erection
Whenever others cried

At 10 I burned a Bible
And was fondled by a priest
By 12 I had sex with girlfriends
By 13 I screwed boys
And special little animals
Were my fondest toys

Yes I am a heathen
No I don't love God
The devil has annointed me
With his sacred rod

So I advise you not to cross me
I warn you straight and true
Or I will kill your children
Or give a plague to you

Man can never stop me
My father owns this world
If you ever try to hurt me
His wrath shall be unfurled

I'll never bow to anyone
You must find the key
All that I will tell you is
The price is clear and free


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I am made from an evil seed
A dark thing really bad
A hateful horrible twisted seed
The devils favorite lad

When I was young my mother felt
The evil quicken in her womb
Some nasty putrid spirit
From a ancient tomb

When I was born there was a sense
That something was truely wrong
A sadness overhung me
Like a funeral song

As I grew up My parents wished
That I would just be gone
The other kids wouldn't play
My dark shadow was so long

I killed my cat and then my dog
But said they just up and died
I remember getting an erection
Whenever others cried

At 10 I burned a Bible
And was fondled by a priest
By 12 I had sex with girlfriends
By 13 I screwed boys
And special little animals
Were my fondest toys

Yes I am a heathen
No I don't love God
The devil has annointed me
With his sacred rod

So I advise you not to cross me
I warn you straight and true
Or I will kill your children
Or give a plague to you

Man can never stop me
My father owns this world
If you ever try to hurt me
His wrath shall be unfurled

I'll never bow to anyone
You must find the key
All that I will tell you is
The price is clear and free

Hey, I think The Dark and Evil Seed will suit best

sad sad poem you need Jesus He is real seek him with all your heart YOU ARE NOT AN ACCIDENT