Poem I Made?

Question:anger mixing with depression trying to find a reason to live a reason to die. A reason why I crawl and don't fly. I am a boy not a man not a guy. I walk down the street wondering if the preson I pass will wave hi. I feel the sigh. I feel the cry. So am I worth digging a hole to lye. I ask now should I say bye.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: anger mixing with depression trying to find a reason to live a reason to die. A reason why I crawl and don't fly. I am a boy not a man not a guy. I walk down the street wondering if the preson I pass will wave hi. I feel the sigh. I feel the cry. So am I worth digging a hole to lye. I ask now should I say bye.

I liked you poem it was good .i wrote one today with the same kind of darkness as i love darker poetry.

I am loving the passion..however I believe you may be a little depressed

it seems like you put a good effort into it it has a good sylable avg. and it has a good size not to big and not to small but you should wwork on punctuation and spelling

A poem is generally not written in paragraph form, or else it's considered prose.

What's with all the depressing angst posted here?

Do all poets wallow in the stench of their own waste?

Look at the beautiful world and find something worthwhile to write about!

Depression and sadness are not interesting.

no u shouldn't try to look at the brighter things in life and ask yourself....Why choose death over life when your granted both?

Your soul is shaking in your body.... trying to escape.....you must stay calm, you must relax, it is not your time just yet...just be patient and things will come, take a deep breath and good things will be done....

I answer, no, you should not say goodbye. Rather find a reason why. As you look at the stars and heavens above, know that God is real. And God is love.

I think it is excellent but you should try and do something like this:
'Anger mixing with depression trying to find a reason to die
A reason why I crawl and don't fly'

You know with space. Good job.

Poem I made
I have anger with depression
this is one of my expressions
along with trying to find a reason to die
I can't imagine why
You are a boy
just the same enjoy
I am not a man
but I do the best I can
Walking down the street
with my sore feet
wondering if the person I pass will say hi
suddenly I feel the sigh
I must say bye
for I feel I am going to cry

intriguing, it makes me want to look deeper into your life. I love the sentence about crawling, its great.

It's ok.
Too much rhyming for my taste.
Nice:)

If this is really how you feel, then don't say goodbye to the world just yet... its always sad when someone commits suicide and stuff. :(

Anyway, I can really relate to this poem of yours, its well-written. Sometimes I feel as if.. I can't quite describe it in words. I guess the word "invisible" would be the closest one to it in my dictionary, but in my case, people know I exist, they just... ignore me... unless it has something to do with getting answers from me or something :/