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Question:I serch I seek I seek to find
I seek to find peace mind
Yet silent contemplasion brings
Sonudless scream
Witch ehco and momeries wake
I pray silentice break break.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I serch I seek I seek to find
I seek to find peace mind
Yet silent contemplasion brings
Sonudless scream
Witch ehco and momeries wake
I pray silentice break break.

PUNCTUATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

ugh.

It's quite good except for the lack of punctuation and your spelling mistakes/typos

serch = search

peace mind = ??peace of mind??

contemplasion = contemplation

sonudless = soundless

momeries = memories

silentice = silence?

It has potential but it needs a lot of work on the grammar and spelling.

I agree with the other answers; it has potential but needs lots of work on it. There is also a contradiction. You are looking for 'peace of mind', but you end by asking for the silence to break. Surely you should want the silence not to break?