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Position:Home>Poetry> What is your interpretation of this poem that I wrote?Question:Vanilla; Perhaps Chocolate Liquid extracts infused in lives And dredged across the blades of knives Tinctured in a cloying blend To taste and taste and taste again ‘Til all that’s left on lonely shelves Is white-on-white shadow of selves Discerning tongues wont to savor Hidden spice of unknown flavor Menu refined for lover’s ballots Dark liqueurs to moisten palates Mixed about in novel method A cocoa swirl most intrepid Swapping time and secrets hoarded Recipe deemed delightfully sordid Is decadent twist enough to sate From time to time across your plate? ? cae 3/11/08 Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Vanilla; Perhaps Chocolate Liquid extracts infused in lives And dredged across the blades of knives Tinctured in a cloying blend To taste and taste and taste again ‘Til all that’s left on lonely shelves Is white-on-white shadow of selves Discerning tongues wont to savor Hidden spice of unknown flavor Menu refined for lover’s ballots Dark liqueurs to moisten palates Mixed about in novel method A cocoa swirl most intrepid Swapping time and secrets hoarded Recipe deemed delightfully sordid Is decadent twist enough to sate From time to time across your plate? ? cae 3/11/08 uhh is it about life sort of? and peoples' personalities...? ((edit: it's really freaking good - no lie, not like other crappy poems i've read on here....if i could just figure it out, haha...need to go get my handy dictionary)) sounds like its about food chocolate or vanilla syrups First verse sounds like you're describing blood. Rest of it has some good phrases but doesn't really go anywhere. M-m-m-m-m, sounds like a candy specialist and the lovely descriptions of the trade. Ahhhh, sweeeeet yummies to savor and taste, where "discerning tongues wont to savor" and create new flavors and do novel things with all the ingredients.......... the big kitchen of life where we combine and create and sample bit by bit all the varieties and tastes. Oh great now I have to find a chocolate somewhere in this house!!! :O)))) jungle fever Very well written, Iambic Pantameter, right? But that aside, it doesn't seem to have much direction, at first it seems like a metaphor on 'the human condition' but after a while... it just gets a little tedious with all the talk of candies. It made me hungry. |