The start of it just for YOU and you know who you are!?

Question:She never promised kisses goodnight
She only promised the touching of skin causing you utter delight
No kisses upon your lips just ones below the hips

She doesn't know why you seek revenge, your utter coldness she will not defend.
it was just one night
Now the only kisses she sends are blown out to the wind? No they land upon lips and skin that are only reserved for him.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: She never promised kisses goodnight
She only promised the touching of skin causing you utter delight
No kisses upon your lips just ones below the hips

She doesn't know why you seek revenge, your utter coldness she will not defend.
it was just one night
Now the only kisses she sends are blown out to the wind? No they land upon lips and skin that are only reserved for him.

I love the first part.
It sounds like it's in progress?
If you worked a little on it, you could make it flow better.
Nice work:)

This is quite interesting. I like how you wrote this. Am waiting to see the rest. Good job.

Interesting. You need to work on the meter. Other then that and that I think you need to do a little more with it too it's starting to be a good poem.