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Position:Home>Poetry> One of my most IMPORTANT POEMS. "Suicide Solution". Do you like it. WhQuestion:I've ruined my life Don't really want to go But the true facts are It's the end of the show So how do I do it? What is a plan? Needs to be right To prove I'm a man Theres nobody left So it won't hurt or abuse Everthythings gone now Nothing to lose So what will it be, A gun or a rope? Or carbon monoxide Maybe vodka and dope Or drive to Niagara And drift off the falls I'm such a coward Just don't have the balls Then there's the old staple You know antifreeze A slow painful death Like some rare disease How about the idea of cutting my wrists Get in a warm bath And just kind of drift Then there's the option of playing an act Point a toy gun at a cop And let him react I know of one more way It's spiritually deep Freeze to death You just fall asleep What do I do How do I go? It is more confusing Than one could possibly know People point fingers Say "coward" "selfish" "fool" Please don't give me judgement What I need is a tool Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I've ruined my life Don't really want to go But the true facts are It's the end of the show So how do I do it? What is a plan? Needs to be right To prove I'm a man Theres nobody left So it won't hurt or abuse Everthythings gone now Nothing to lose So what will it be, A gun or a rope? Or carbon monoxide Maybe vodka and dope Or drive to Niagara And drift off the falls I'm such a coward Just don't have the balls Then there's the old staple You know antifreeze A slow painful death Like some rare disease How about the idea of cutting my wrists Get in a warm bath And just kind of drift Then there's the option of playing an act Point a toy gun at a cop And let him react I know of one more way It's spiritually deep Freeze to death You just fall asleep What do I do How do I go? It is more confusing Than one could possibly know People point fingers Say "coward" "selfish" "fool" Please don't give me judgement What I need is a tool =O i'm speechless. that. is. so. freaking. amazing. not. even. kidding. i can really relate to that because ive felt like that before, and i think there is more emotion in that than i had in my body. I think it's good. The subject matter is a bit dark, but I don't think you are seriously contemplating suicide, so it's okay. Well I like the use of words, but not the fact that this poem is pretty negative, but I do really like it, it expresses a person thinking of suicide's thoughts and feelings. I like how it rhymes and everything just flows. Overall I though it was a great read and very true =) I liked it but at some parts you seem desprate to ryme so you used no offence lame... words but only like 1 time. I really liked the poem. :) I think it's pretty dark. I'm not for suicide. I hope you aren't either. I hope you realize that it's not the way out of your problems it just gives a whole other set of problems. |