Opinion Please??? Short Poem?

Question:Tender lips,
That taste as sweet as chocolate,
Deep; sensitive eyes
That sparkle like the stars
Skin; so soft
It feels like a light spring breeze against my face.
This is you,
You look deep into my soul,
I cannot hide,
Your smile is so bright,
It warms me,
Your love; so strong,
It carries me,
It only takes one touch from you,
And I know for sure,
That this is a paradise I am not willing to leave

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Tender lips,
That taste as sweet as chocolate,
Deep; sensitive eyes
That sparkle like the stars
Skin; so soft
It feels like a light spring breeze against my face.
This is you,
You look deep into my soul,
I cannot hide,
Your smile is so bright,
It warms me,
Your love; so strong,
It carries me,
It only takes one touch from you,
And I know for sure,
That this is a paradise I am not willing to leave

Very strong descriptions. Great job.

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Nice:)

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