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Question:Here is a new poem called "The Watchers"

As I walk they fly over head,
Watching,
Waiting,
Their bodies are full of thick ebony feathers,
Their eyes are as deep as the dark sky,
Just their appearance above me makes me nervous,
But it's almost as though they guard me,
And protect me,
The watchers
The crows.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Here is a new poem called "The Watchers"

As I walk they fly over head,
Watching,
Waiting,
Their bodies are full of thick ebony feathers,
Their eyes are as deep as the dark sky,
Just their appearance above me makes me nervous,
But it's almost as though they guard me,
And protect me,
The watchers
The crows.

thats really interesting!!
i love the name.
don't stop writing!!

I think it's pretty good.
Quite original.
Nice work:)