My poem sadness what do you think??

Question:I see the light shining so bright as it shines away from me.
I look at the stars and all i see is scars of the years behind me .

Mama used to say one day you'll be happy and free
She didn't mean to have heartbreak all the life through always stick home like glue' as anymore hurt could maybe kill me.

Every night when i pray for the right to have 1 month of happiness' before i die much as i alway cry i wish i was not ever born.

Why do some see colors and some see none at all .
If you looked at my life you would see the knife where i sit cutting all day..You see sadness with no life ' but that's the story of me.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I see the light shining so bright as it shines away from me.
I look at the stars and all i see is scars of the years behind me .

Mama used to say one day you'll be happy and free
She didn't mean to have heartbreak all the life through always stick home like glue' as anymore hurt could maybe kill me.

Every night when i pray for the right to have 1 month of happiness' before i die much as i alway cry i wish i was not ever born.

Why do some see colors and some see none at all .
If you looked at my life you would see the knife where i sit cutting all day..You see sadness with no life ' but that's the story of me.

let me say this at least its not targeted at anyone like ur last one lol

uh......................................... :( Creative though.

Why do you wallow in sadness?
Wake from your torpid slumber and dance in the light.

That is disturbing, I hope that is not yourself you are talking about.
Be a friend, and talk with her.

Dear sherry, B positive in ur life,try to see every thing in bright prospect and not always in dark side,after night,day is going to come,after every sunset, u r going to enjoy sunrise 4 sure..