It's another poem, from me. Will you offer your critique?

Question:Very short one from the cards

QUEEN OF PENTACLES

You will find
my secret
in no book,
my power
in no formula.

All worth knowing
is within Earth,
and secrets
best hidden
in plain view.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very short one from the cards

QUEEN OF PENTACLES

You will find
my secret
in no book,
my power
in no formula.

All worth knowing
is within Earth,
and secrets
best hidden
in plain view.

There are not many who can say so much with so few words. You shake the foundations upon which my sesquipedalian orotundity is based.

wow. the meaning is very evident. I love it! how can i critique this? wow

I'm sorry...I didn't get it. It flowed very well, but it needs to be longer. Maybe you should concider putting in another set of lines to clarify what the poem is about.

geesh... its hard to critique for such a poem keep up the good work

very cool. makes you think

I love the subtlety but it seems short.... As always, just the way we like it.

You are going to love what I have to say... Or not, it doesn't really matter.

this is the power of woman baby! It is all about the right of females and their strength. don't tell me I'm wrong, because each poem means something new to each reader. This is its meaning for me.

I don't know if I'd call it a poem per say however I do find it a very interesting read. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

wow, i wish dark moor used the poem as lyrics for their tarot album....its cutely written.

..hmmm..a farmers creed. :)

and omg Jeff...
your words are, are,, are ..
(looking up something to describe it..)

no..not that..
no.
ok, maybe thats close..
but no, not quite...

..,, ya! here it is!!
your words are

PSycHedelic!! hahaha!

my ears curled like a potatoe chip,
i dont hear stuff like that out here everyday you know.

Hmm This is a really cool little poem..I love the last few lines "secrets best hidden in plain view" That's too funny