Chance love?

Question:Life is full of chances.
Untill by chance we die.
But death is fate and thus
there is on chance
that love can live forever.
But while my heart does beat
there's love in this wolrd for you

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Life is full of chances.
Untill by chance we die.
But death is fate and thus
there is on chance
that love can live forever.
But while my heart does beat
there's love in this wolrd for you

your poems are good...you should consider posting them in a writers forum, if you haven't already. People on there give really helpful tips and give good constructive criticism. Anyways once again good job!

Very nice

I'm better
(kinda)
..... well you wouldn't have been the first to leave me standing on a cold road
I mean
it was bound to happen
the echoes of a love that never existed
and one
fated never to bloom
the world is the enemy of some
and hates others
I AM one of the hated
the world looks down to someone
and from birth
marks them down
"he" says the world "is one who we will have fun with"
and so the world toys with the accursed one
the world cares not
for anyone
or their emotions
it cares only for its own amusement
its own happiness
but of course
the world is not satisfied with toying
it likes to get personal with its persecutions
so also
from birth
it fates that someone
will of course
break them
break them to the point of nothing
the world becomes a void
of black and despair
the shadows poke
with their heinous claws
the jab with knives
but the pain
is nothing
the emotional pain the came from the love
is the only thing that hurts
the daggers
mere pinpricks
nothing more
the claws
a mere pinch
but the shadows know all
so they take the form of the lover
and mock the accursed one
he knows not what to do
in a situation such as this
because the torture
of his mind
is the only thing he feels
he feels not pain
but AGONY so full and powerful
that it dominates the mind
he feels the emotions
a blessing and a curse
the happiness of latter days
fades
as the shadows close in
they consume all
and as the world watches this pain
they see
they have done what they wanted to do
Break another innocent
........................