The Rose - poem?

Question:I wrote this poem for my husband for valentines day- and i gave him a red rose w/ it. :)

This Rose

I took this rose
From my heart.
It’s been growing
From the start.

It will only live
For at least, 3 days through
Just to tell you how much
I’m in love with you.

As it dies,
its magic will stay.
Forever in your heart
To remind you everyday…

That when we hold hands,
kiss, and touch.
Each moment together,
each moment in love.

That nothing can compare of how I feel
When I’m with you.
And I’m hoping that you feel
The same way too.

Just a little bit of love made our
Rose Garden start,
If you ever need another rose,
All you have to do, is reach into my heart.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I wrote this poem for my husband for valentines day- and i gave him a red rose w/ it. :)

This Rose

I took this rose
From my heart.
It’s been growing
From the start.

It will only live
For at least, 3 days through
Just to tell you how much
I’m in love with you.

As it dies,
its magic will stay.
Forever in your heart
To remind you everyday…

That when we hold hands,
kiss, and touch.
Each moment together,
each moment in love.

That nothing can compare of how I feel
When I’m with you.
And I’m hoping that you feel
The same way too.

Just a little bit of love made our
Rose Garden start,
If you ever need another rose,
All you have to do, is reach into my heart.

I like it. it is pretty good, there is however a change I would make; "That nothing can compare of how I feel" I would change that to; "That nothing can compare to how I feel. Now that is just a simple suggestion from a simple person.

aww thats so sweet! i liked it!

That was very sweet. Iam sure your husband would have been mighty pleased if you gift him with such a beautiful poem. You must really love your husband to write such a romantic poem.

find the poem so so. The part where you tell of your heart, how it is that it is a rose, is really touching.