Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like my revolutionary poetry?

Your poem is s h i t.

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I do...I like it. I especially like the line "Hunter poaching a two-legged game". Very vivid...kinda made my heart leap.

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It's good. I think your sourcing of the poaching of game is fantastic. I didn't think it was so good at first (that line), then I thought wait, it's a poaching of the red coats. Then I thought, ahh, it's sublime.

Cheers.

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cool

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It's nice TD......a shower of fresh spirits!

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This poem has no rhyme or rhythm, but you have some good phrases. Write it as prose.

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Looking down from above--no, I'm not God, just a Canadian--I see the theme of American history, so well known, so oft repeated, painted for me yet again.

Perhaps it is because I am Canadian or, rather, not American, that I become tired hearing these laurels sung again, yet again, but I do.

Still, liked the "officer and enlisted alike" line, it had a certain Universal sense beyond the mowing down of redcoats.

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Yes, I like your revolutionary poetry.

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Yes, I certainly doodle-doo!!!

And poach they did while
Listening, to the fife and drum.
When that smoke cleared away,
New Americans had won!!!!

Hell had no fury like our fighting Americans!!!!

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Surely did, spied a couple of my ancestors marching there.

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Amazing that this poem imitates the marching of the soldiers. It could be a marching song. Congratulations on this one!

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Yes .....It's short & to the point

Officers & Enlisted A like = Equals In Death

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I like it. Especially the sniping part. Snipers are deadly. I was gonna say "see avatar", but I changed it. lol.

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Yes, i like this one TDE. I got my book!!! it is wonderful. your father was a handsome man TDE.

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