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Question:i am writing a poem and i need suggestions

here's the line:

Rage had engulfed me,
And I didn't care anymore.
All I wanted was for her to hurt,
(fill in the blank)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i am writing a poem and i need suggestions

here's the line:

Rage had engulfed me,
And I didn't care anymore.
All I wanted was for her to hurt,
(fill in the blank)

a need to even the score
turn and cose the door
see her tears fall to the floor
the person I once adored
please don't use whore
*the ONE I once adored*

The phoenix and the dragon
both know flight and flame
yet they cannot be together
for they are not the same

I understand

How about....

To feel the same sore.

As in feel the same pain as the speaker feels.
please keep me posted on this poem and is it true?

and i really like margie's top one...

To even the score.

and i agree with the last one too.

"But I don't care anymore"

or

"But do I care anymore?"

or

"For her to fall to the floor"

I felt so battered & so sore
because of that stupid whore

door
sore
core
loor
shore
floor
Hope these help.

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