Your opinion on a poem?

Question:I find myself alone
under the cloudy night gloom
it's all I ever knew
but it's too early to assume.
Crest-fallen hopes
I'm starting to think
under the cloudy night gloom
a single star winks.
In that star is comfort, guidance
I reach up and grab
That single shining star,
I grasp with all my strength
The light ahead stays up afar
Though with that single shining star,
That has drifted from the Heavens
It guides me through
that cloudy night gloom
To the shining path ahead.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I find myself alone
under the cloudy night gloom
it's all I ever knew
but it's too early to assume.
Crest-fallen hopes
I'm starting to think
under the cloudy night gloom
a single star winks.
In that star is comfort, guidance
I reach up and grab
That single shining star,
I grasp with all my strength
The light ahead stays up afar
Though with that single shining star,
That has drifted from the Heavens
It guides me through
that cloudy night gloom
To the shining path ahead.

I love this. If you worte it thank you. This gave me inspiration and I think I can now get through my day.

that nice it seem like a sad poem to me!

WHOAH same name. pretty cool. what's your last name?

i really like it. i got a really clear picture in my head of what you were trying to portray, and i felt it. i love the two lines 'that single shining star/ i grasp with all my strenght'.. i really like this poem.

that was amazing and beautiful! i love it! if you submitted that to a poetry sight, you could win a prize. keep writing! that was awesome!

seee, i told you this poem's amazing :]]
everyone loves itt. write a book. please.
for me?[: I'll be the first to buyy it =]

Totally cool! I like it! Great job.