Hmmmm, a poem headed for Mars??? Whadda ya think?

Question:(figured I'd take a trip there real quick <3)

Mars Is Calling...

Rising to persuading calls

"SHOUT OUTS"

Echoing from Mars!

Hands sweaty,

Fingers tingle

Are we

Destined for the stars?

"SHOUT OUTS"

Echoing from Mars!

Poetical words

Spin ‘round...

Are we

Destined for the stars?

A new realm to be found?

Poetical words spin ‘round...

Push that pen!

Type out on keys!

A new realm

To be found?

New poets

Living blissfully?

Push that pen!

Type out on keys!

Are we

Destined for the stars?

New poets living blissfully?

"Shout Outs"

Echoing from Mars...

~Shad~

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: (figured I'd take a trip there real quick <3)

Mars Is Calling...

Rising to persuading calls

"SHOUT OUTS"

Echoing from Mars!

Hands sweaty,

Fingers tingle

Are we

Destined for the stars?

"SHOUT OUTS"

Echoing from Mars!

Poetical words

Spin ‘round...

Are we

Destined for the stars?

A new realm to be found?

Poetical words spin ‘round...

Push that pen!

Type out on keys!

A new realm

To be found?

New poets

Living blissfully?

Push that pen!

Type out on keys!

Are we

Destined for the stars?

New poets living blissfully?

"Shout Outs"

Echoing from Mars...

~Shad~

See you on Mars, I wanna go there too, waiting for inspiration. For now, my muse is a druggie. See poem

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...or not.

I love this work, it's filled with passion and hope, almost prayerful but in a jubilant way. Whenever you go, take me with you.

how long did it take you to write this? it's a good poem

iReally Like It <3

thats awsome

have a good day
XxX

Not what I call poetry.

cool poem. It's a lot like a pantoum. Is this in any particular style or did it come from your fabulous brain? I love it. It's definitely destined for Mars.

I hope this one gets to Mars.

its kinda wierd but i like it. keep up the good work!

Mars calling!

Lovely, I hate to fly, can we take the train?

I really liked this a lot' and please do you any room left as i need to go to mars too i will write some great poetry once i get away from the haters and reporters.

this poem is out of this world!!!!!!!!!! great work!!!!!!!!!

"Outa this world"!

Well ... what's taking you so long?! I've been waiting for ya.