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Question:she has big beautiful, brown eyes and white skin thats so gorgeus


she has amazing dress sense and she smells lovely please keep adding positive things and make me a poem for her please :) i no it seems like im trying to push hard work onto you guys but she means alot to me


try and make it yourself not copy it from th internet

any poets out there? please ill be greatful... i dont care about the length


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: she has big beautiful, brown eyes and white skin thats so gorgeus


she has amazing dress sense and she smells lovely please keep adding positive things and make me a poem for her please :) i no it seems like im trying to push hard work onto you guys but she means alot to me


try and make it yourself not copy it from th internet

any poets out there? please ill be greatful... i dont care about the length

honestly you should write yourself but heres somethin i made to HELP you alright

"Beutiful,
it's no wonder i fell in love with you
from your gorgeous eyes
to your nice smelling skin
your smile makes me see fireworks
its like you sufficate me
with every breathe you take from me
you dress as if a professional taught you
but its just your great imagination
you make my mouth drop
when i see you from a far
its no wonder
you mean so much to me
you hair looks so soft
its a great sacrifice for my hands
to stay put
i care so much of you,
will you be my mine?"

do it yourself.

hmm okay so you want people to write a poem about the girl that is so special to you and that you love?

think about this: if you really love her and if she is that special you should have no problem writing out a poem for her.


your wide, curious sandy eyes plastered against your alabaster skin. <- theres a start.

Plagiarise William Wordsworth's " Lucy Grey "

SARAH : that's simply yuck !

I think heaven has sent you here to spend life's journey with me..

Loves Start

Where do I start?
Where should I begin?
Your eyes of brown so beautiful,
Your heart that takes my breath away,
Perhaps your grace which allows you to sway
I watch I wonder, where should I start?
What should I say?
The words escape me as I as your incredible scent confounds me.
There very clothes you wear taunt me as they hint of the beauty beneath.
Just as your ivory skin bespeaks of the beauty within.
Where do I start?
Where do I began?
What should I say?...

I love you!
Such a place to begin.

2008 ? David Schirtzinger A.K.A. Kirstahn

wow those other poems definitely suck.
I wrote one, but you're gonna have to pay me if you want it.
; )

You look like a piece of heaven
even though you're eleven,

Your face is pure
which makes guys lure,

You make yummy food
to set my mood,

Your toes are cute
and smell like fruit,

Your poo is white as your face
you hair feels like lace,

I'm the one for you
because i know you don't smell like poo.

i cud, but poetry takes time and youd end up picking some sh*tty one over mine anyway. email me if ur serious about it tho

to write an ode I need her name
or this could be for any dame ..!
anyways...
petal white skin and eyes deep brown
that seem so big that you could drown
inside them sometimes.
.I think and breathe her all the while
there's nothing better than her smile
except..... just all of her
while we re together time stands still
I want to hold her close until
.....forever

Those big brown eyes show me when she,s happy,
They droop when she is sad,
Her lovely smell inspires me,
She is never ever bad.
She shows me lifes worth living,
Her dress sense is so pure,
I show her that i love her,
Of that she can be sure.
As we face lifes roads together,
She never will offend,
I will love her unconditionaly,
Together to the end