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Position:Home>Poetry> HELP PLEASE I NEED A POEM A UNIqUE POEM ABOUT A GIRL...?Question:she has big beautiful, brown eyes and white skin thats so gorgeus she has amazing dress sense and she smells lovely please keep adding positive things and make me a poem for her please :) i no it seems like im trying to push hard work onto you guys but she means alot to me try and make it yourself not copy it from th internet any poets out there? please ill be greatful... i dont care about the length Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: she has big beautiful, brown eyes and white skin thats so gorgeus she has amazing dress sense and she smells lovely please keep adding positive things and make me a poem for her please :) i no it seems like im trying to push hard work onto you guys but she means alot to me try and make it yourself not copy it from th internet any poets out there? please ill be greatful... i dont care about the length honestly you should write yourself but heres somethin i made to HELP you alright "Beutiful, it's no wonder i fell in love with you from your gorgeous eyes to your nice smelling skin your smile makes me see fireworks its like you sufficate me with every breathe you take from me you dress as if a professional taught you but its just your great imagination you make my mouth drop when i see you from a far its no wonder you mean so much to me you hair looks so soft its a great sacrifice for my hands to stay put i care so much of you, will you be my mine?" do it yourself. hmm okay so you want people to write a poem about the girl that is so special to you and that you love? think about this: if you really love her and if she is that special you should have no problem writing out a poem for her. your wide, curious sandy eyes plastered against your alabaster skin. <- theres a start. Plagiarise William Wordsworth's " Lucy Grey " SARAH : that's simply yuck ! I think heaven has sent you here to spend life's journey with me.. Loves Start Where do I start? Where should I begin? Your eyes of brown so beautiful, Your heart that takes my breath away, Perhaps your grace which allows you to sway I watch I wonder, where should I start? What should I say? The words escape me as I as your incredible scent confounds me. There very clothes you wear taunt me as they hint of the beauty beneath. Just as your ivory skin bespeaks of the beauty within. Where do I start? Where do I began? What should I say?... I love you! Such a place to begin. 2008 ? David Schirtzinger A.K.A. Kirstahn wow those other poems definitely suck. I wrote one, but you're gonna have to pay me if you want it. ; ) You look like a piece of heaven even though you're eleven, Your face is pure which makes guys lure, You make yummy food to set my mood, Your toes are cute and smell like fruit, Your poo is white as your face you hair feels like lace, I'm the one for you because i know you don't smell like poo. i cud, but poetry takes time and youd end up picking some sh*tty one over mine anyway. email me if ur serious about it tho to write an ode I need her name or this could be for any dame ..! anyways... petal white skin and eyes deep brown that seem so big that you could drown inside them sometimes. .I think and breathe her all the while there's nothing better than her smile except..... just all of her while we re together time stands still I want to hold her close until .....forever Those big brown eyes show me when she,s happy, They droop when she is sad, Her lovely smell inspires me, She is never ever bad. She shows me lifes worth living, Her dress sense is so pure, I show her that i love her, Of that she can be sure. As we face lifes roads together, She never will offend, I will love her unconditionaly, Together to the end |