Im reposting this poem of mine called "ruined...reborn" cuz i want mor

Question:our love is in ruins
the very thought of you is forlorn
my love is torn
oh what i would give to have your love for me reborn

my feelings are lithe
i love you always for your spirit so blithe
but your memory is still fading, fading inside
pleading, pleading to be rekindled
oh what i would give to see it, see this light up your eyes

again, again with the joy
now haste, haste with the thoughts of us
hold fast to the love, the love shared between us
tight, tightly we grasp to the lingering flame
flame thou hast once we lost
return, for my aim is directed
once lost, but for now we have kept it

our love once ruined
this much stonger love, we have gained
shall not pass away
for my thoughts of your figure
my vision rekindled
not by sight alone
but by everyday
we are joined. we are love.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: our love is in ruins
the very thought of you is forlorn
my love is torn
oh what i would give to have your love for me reborn

my feelings are lithe
i love you always for your spirit so blithe
but your memory is still fading, fading inside
pleading, pleading to be rekindled
oh what i would give to see it, see this light up your eyes

again, again with the joy
now haste, haste with the thoughts of us
hold fast to the love, the love shared between us
tight, tightly we grasp to the lingering flame
flame thou hast once we lost
return, for my aim is directed
once lost, but for now we have kept it

our love once ruined
this much stonger love, we have gained
shall not pass away
for my thoughts of your figure
my vision rekindled
not by sight alone
but by everyday
we are joined. we are love.

I really loved your great poem so much as i can really relate as my heart is broken and my tears are falling for my love i have lost too; Your poem was so full of pain and with hope and you wrote it from your own experiences..

That is one intense poem only someone who really knows what it feels like to be in love could understand it you really have a talent do not waste it you should write poems for greeting cards or do what i did i wrote poems for the death anninversaries in the local newspaper