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Question:(Always a second side, this is the bookend to the morning post. Someone urged me to write this.)

Lover to Luver

My dear... I'm leaving
and I don't give a _____
anymore! That's right,
ANYMORE!
You say you're my rock?
yeah, well what about the chain?
You say you're splintered?
Then tell me why I am
plucking the barbs you threw?
No...I am not angry,
H..L NO I am not angry.
I'm just not taking it anymore!
Yes, I figured what I need,
and rocks aren't included!
So I am going and I am
not stopping anymore.
No not anymore!
Yeah...same to you!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: (Always a second side, this is the bookend to the morning post. Someone urged me to write this.)

Lover to Luver

My dear... I'm leaving
and I don't give a _____
anymore! That's right,
ANYMORE!
You say you're my rock?
yeah, well what about the chain?
You say you're splintered?
Then tell me why I am
plucking the barbs you threw?
No...I am not angry,
H..L NO I am not angry.
I'm just not taking it anymore!
Yes, I figured what I need,
and rocks aren't included!
So I am going and I am
not stopping anymore.
No not anymore!
Yeah...same to you!

I now feel complete. This was great!!! I love/luv this story. *secretly upset that I didn't think of it first*

Though this is a touchy matter, I can see the whole story. Two people just letting it ALL out.
*waits patiently for neon's next work*

So... Whats the question? Lol

Peace
M.I.A.

Who'd a thought lover would be angrier!

Dondi grins at neonman.