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Position:Home>Poetry> Perhaps an odd one for a Sunday morning, but what does anyone think?Question:Jazz Eyes closed Scent is as air smells like here There is no stimulus Palate had been cleansed It is empty Blank Toe taps effortlessly Brushing symbol Otherwise No movement Cool, dead angel trumpets song Grooves Follows paths unseen Evident in retrospect Bass is thumbed Metronome Playful metronome Softly Complex piano intrudes Is welcomed Becomes part of the whole The only sense fed on this day Is aural But this man This man in this place Is sated And complete As virtually motionless In darkness He rides the groove To the birth The birth of cool Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Jazz Eyes closed Scent is as air smells like here There is no stimulus Palate had been cleansed It is empty Blank Toe taps effortlessly Brushing symbol Otherwise No movement Cool, dead angel trumpets song Grooves Follows paths unseen Evident in retrospect Bass is thumbed Metronome Playful metronome Softly Complex piano intrudes Is welcomed Becomes part of the whole The only sense fed on this day Is aural But this man This man in this place Is sated And complete As virtually motionless In darkness He rides the groove To the birth The birth of cool You painted a nice picture or series of sound bites. The metronome was very busy with the flow. Well done. It's OK, it's already Sunday afternoon where I am, and I just feel like listening to Charlie Parker now, after reading your piece. Very good. Eh, it's pretty good. That's Good! Check Out My Lyrics: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;... beautiful I am listening to Charlie Patton. playing,"It won't be long." As I answer you. It put me back 50 years. The trouble is that I feel like I'm dating myself. [I guess I have to, no one else will go out with me.] Copacetic, man. I think it's pretty good. Nice work:) |