Break of day - written by Dark Prince & Myself - How do you like?

Question:break of day

Out deep in the forest black,
tiny birds chirp forth and back.
Cloaked trees of the midnight air,
once invisible, reappear.

The sun peaks out from eastern shore,
once sleeping squirrels wake, explore.
Shades of yellow, orange and blue,
silhouettes of clouds come into view.

Time was once I'd greet the day,
now the day, it shows the way.
Hoping for bright promises made,
to arrive as a bless-ed parade.

The sun it shines the glow of love,
we bask in it and look above.
Our lives come down, just to this,
you my love, the sun, a kiss.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: break of day

Out deep in the forest black,
tiny birds chirp forth and back.
Cloaked trees of the midnight air,
once invisible, reappear.

The sun peaks out from eastern shore,
once sleeping squirrels wake, explore.
Shades of yellow, orange and blue,
silhouettes of clouds come into view.

Time was once I'd greet the day,
now the day, it shows the way.
Hoping for bright promises made,
to arrive as a bless-ed parade.

The sun it shines the glow of love,
we bask in it and look above.
Our lives come down, just to this,
you my love, the sun, a kiss.

Wow man, team poetry, how flippin' sw33t is this????????

The meta in this this piece is very excellent my friend(s)

Well done!

love it

I like it.

Great poem. You always do..... Keep it up my good friend!

Thanks for asking. Have a great day!

The word to say is "beautiful"

This might qualify as x rated! Let's cool down some! Well done.

Sweet, very nice. Well written with great rhythm and flow.
The rhyme is lovely and the content beautiful. Not that you aren't both wonderful writers as individuals, but you two make a great writing team. I don't know which one of you came up with the final line, but it's awesome.

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