Please tell me what you really think!!!!!?

Question:Your eyes seem so deep and thoughtful,
Your smile so sincere,
that every time I see you,
I want you to be near,
but when I hear your voice,
your words tear into my mind,
inside I shudder with fear,
afraid of you'll think of me,
I tend to want to run and hide.......

Ok so thats it any suggestions and/or critisism is appreciated!!!!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Your eyes seem so deep and thoughtful,
Your smile so sincere,
that every time I see you,
I want you to be near,
but when I hear your voice,
your words tear into my mind,
inside I shudder with fear,
afraid of you'll think of me,
I tend to want to run and hide.......

Ok so thats it any suggestions and/or critisism is appreciated!!!!

amazing you are a beautiful writer i think you should get a title though to make the focus more clear but
its a beautiful beautiful poem
i think you have really kept in mind that writing is about painting a picture and thats exactly what you have done

That's quite good, well done.

I like it but the first line is too long to match the tempo of the rest of the poem, somehow need to shorten that up, otherwise, it flows well