I am 14 and i like making poems.. AM i good at it?

Question:This one is about my bestfriend(who i use to also like) and i had that this awas great the first one is rainy day then be mines.. are they good??

"Rainy Day"

I knew you for along time
When it was dark, you made things shine
You make me happy, when i am sad
As if your an angel, that never got mad
But now its getting dark, cause your almost gone
Have nothing to say its already dawn
I ask you, "why are you leaving?" there was no voice
you say, " I never wanted to, but i had no choice"
The egine Starts, i say my good-byes
The last hug, then we started to cry
Water fell from the sky as the car drives away
Go inside the house, what a sad rainy day

"Be mine"
Now that your gone, i am all alone
All by myslef, with no one to hold
Its hard to Believe, that you're actually gone
As the night awakens, finished with dawn
You said you'd Never leave, looked foward to that
Shouldnt be doing this, but i feel like crap
I thought you were the one, bht you dont agree

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This one is about my bestfriend(who i use to also like) and i had that this awas great the first one is rainy day then be mines.. are they good??

"Rainy Day"

I knew you for along time
When it was dark, you made things shine
You make me happy, when i am sad
As if your an angel, that never got mad
But now its getting dark, cause your almost gone
Have nothing to say its already dawn
I ask you, "why are you leaving?" there was no voice
you say, " I never wanted to, but i had no choice"
The egine Starts, i say my good-byes
The last hug, then we started to cry
Water fell from the sky as the car drives away
Go inside the house, what a sad rainy day

"Be mine"
Now that your gone, i am all alone
All by myslef, with no one to hold
Its hard to Believe, that you're actually gone
As the night awakens, finished with dawn
You said you'd Never leave, looked foward to that
Shouldnt be doing this, but i feel like crap
I thought you were the one, bht you dont agree

Are you sure you just didn't take these from someplace and say their yours but if they are yours then you have a serious talent at poetry

so very good!! i like to write poems sometimes too.

Yes, I see definite potential in your poetry! Good rhymes, a steady rhythm, both important in poetry. I'm a writer, song writer and occasionally a poet as well, so I know a little about it. At 14, if you love what you're doing, then keep at it! Don't worry so much about what people think and just do what you love.

They're good. But you used a lot of words that are too common. sorta cliche. Try using a rhyming dictionary. they help you find words that still rhyme, but you didn't think of. It helps a lot.

Pleas don't take this offensively. Harsh criticism is the only way to get better at writing poetry.

these are good. when i read poetry i want to feel some typ of emotion and when i read these i felt that sadness and compasion, the first one is my favorite but the second is good too!
=) meat_loaf

yea u r really good at it....keep the good work up.

It is very typical that in your teenage years you will start to write poetry to express your feelings. It is a very strong outlet that I would suggest you stick to the rest of your life. You definatly have potential in your poems. At this point in time I would not suggest you publish them or anything. Keep practicing. Dont be afraid to open up a little more and come up with something more original.

Yes, they are. You just need to pay attention to your spelling and grammar and punctuation. You have some really good ideas. Keep writing and read, read, read poetry of others to get the main gist of it okay?