Plz tell me wat u think of my poem?

Question:i don’t care anymore.

i’m at the point of no return

it’s over, it’s done

you seem so worthless now, you’re gone

i know that you were always wrong

it’s just kinda f*cked that it took so long

for me to realize

that i don’t care anymore.

you tore me apart

ripped open my heart

i love you baby

a lie

why?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i don’t care anymore.

i’m at the point of no return

it’s over, it’s done

you seem so worthless now, you’re gone

i know that you were always wrong

it’s just kinda f*cked that it took so long

for me to realize

that i don’t care anymore.

you tore me apart

ripped open my heart

i love you baby

a lie

why?

well, at first i was thinking "hm, i don't like this poem"
then i decided...weighing all sides of this poem, that it is indeed 'good'
you have probably just been through this?
and it made sense to me.
its a pretty good poem. just not to complex, and lacks the mystery of poetry..meaning i didn't even have to think when i was reading it. but at least you conveyed ur meaning clearly enough.

It is very nice, i am sure whoever you wrote this for will be very happy.

turn that into a song

As usual, double spaced teenaged sentiment passing for art. For one, the use of profanity without need, for the second, the lack of proper capitalization and puctuation, the third, complete lack of originality. Delve deeper into what you consider your emotions and find something worth writing about. This...we've seen all of this before.

The use of profanity is a total turn off and I quit reading it the moment I came across it. Sorry. It's so common and lifeless.