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Question:traced are these
of faces of me's
so do try please
to understand me
and my trees
what ever you see
is less than a key
you are like bees
good luck in your life
and good hope to your strife


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: traced are these
of faces of me's
so do try please
to understand me
and my trees
what ever you see
is less than a key
you are like bees
good luck in your life
and good hope to your strife

interesting poem. . . . seems the 'me' is being sarcastic towards 'you' "good luck in your life" but again, "good hope to your strife."
'me' has many faces and pleads with 'you' "to understand me."
wonder why trees and bees or simply for rhyme!! why absence of a knife or the speaker wishes to knife someone!!
sounds complex poem like Jorge Borges' titles!